Ferra North-vane fell into the 21st century and has no idea whats going on. she was in the 1970's and now shes in 2017 all of a sudden. It started when she walked into the woods disobeying her parents orders to stay out and she met a lady who put her in the situation now. All of a sudden she puts her fate and life in the hands of a family she is staying with in the future. Plus someone is threatening to kill her and what she lives for. can she live long enough to get back to her old life, time, and family or will the killer get to her first.
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This is definitely the kind of blurb which would be found on the inner flap of a book. Good job on creating the premise for a story in such a short amount of words!
I recommend remaining concise throughout the text: If capitalization was used in the later half, perhaps using it in the beginning, too. Also, any contractions made just need an apostrophe!
Keep on writing! Take care!
Michelle R.