I know what it’s like and i know how it feels. I know how it feels to be in a place you don’t wanna be in or having to surround yourself with people you don’t like or want to be around. Negative energy. Energy you don’t want. Any kind of energy you dont want is negative. I know how it feels and whats its like to be in a place you felt you didn’t have anyone or a place where you felt you weren’t gonna succeed. But i guess my words of wisdom is you can do this whether you know it or not. Im here.
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I like this idea of you relating with another person on feeling out of place. I would just go over some of the grammar near the end of the piece. It is really only the last sentence- you misplace and misspell a few words. With that quick fix, this piece is perfect!