I am peaceful.
I am pleasant.
I am your freedom.
I am your friend.
And I am your enemy.
I am always there; though..
You might forget me.. sometimes.
I can never go away.
I can be horrible.
I can frighten you.
And can drive you crazy.
Or,
I can be there for you.
Show you want you want.
Help you.
Be your escape.
Sometimes you can’t tell me apart from reality.
And sometimes you can know exactly what part is real and what is not.
I am,
A Dream.
-Justin Thorne
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Your use of anaphora is really powerful here. The change from “I cam” to “I can” takes the reader on a journey through the author’s stream of consciousness.