You should proof read your work before you post it. The word, “I” is ALWAYS capitalized. Plus, the sentences that begin with “none” and “things” should be capitalized, as they are the first words of a new sentence. This is not good writing. So many errors, and it’s only five lines!
Clearly you don’t understand how poetry works. You don’t have to follow the conventional, strict rules of grammar. It’s an artistic choice to capitalize words or not. The lack of capitalization and punctuation could represent that the author feels their life is spinning out of control, that there’s no stopping or pausing or structure, and the way they set up their poem reflects that. It’s actually a quite brilliant way to convey their feelings without having to outright say it.
Maybe before you go judging other people’s work you should consider their motive behind it. And furthermore, it’s not constructive to only criticize their grammar without even mentioning the content. We are not here to tear people down; we’re here to build them up.
Thank you for standing up for me and understanding poetry like I do I love you and all your support you saw the meaning behind my words
Masarati, you don’t have to feel this way. You don’t have to feel unfixable. You are most certainly a person filled with purpose. Now, I know that the word “God” can seem so terrible to people who don’t truly have a relationship with him, but He does not think of you as a person not worth His time, care, and love. He thinks of you as one who can be His friend. He wants you to know that He loves you. It is true! I know because He has healed me. He has held my hand through times of trial, times of pain – physical and emotional – and He has loved me and will always love me with an unconditional kind of love that no one else but Him can give. He is love. His Son, Jesus Christ, died on the cross for you… for your sin and pain. He wants to let you into Heaven one day so that you can spend life with Him. He wants you to let Him heal you. Jesus died on the cross for your sins and rose again. He lives, and wants you to live… and not just live – but live well, with His beautiful, never-changing love. He won’t turn you away if you ask Him into your heart. Ask Jesus to come into your heart, It will change you. It isn’t magic, and maybe you won’t feel completely better all at once, but I can tell you from personal experience that Jesus is in it for life if you want Him to be; He is in it for the long haul. You are loved.
I appreciate you for speaking about God even tho we are to different religions I appreciate that you are a strong believer in God
Thank you, but I don’t have a religion. I’m not an atheist. I just don’t have a religion. I am so grateful to you for sharing your support for me, though. Much love!
You should proof read your work before you post it. The word, “I” is ALWAYS capitalized. Plus, the sentences that begin with “none” and “things” should be capitalized, as they are the first words of a new sentence. This is not good writing. So many errors, and it’s only five lines!
Clearly you don’t understand how poetry works. You don’t have to follow the conventional, strict rules of grammar. It’s an artistic choice to capitalize words or not. The lack of capitalization and punctuation could represent that the author feels their life is spinning out of control, that there’s no stopping or pausing or structure, and the way they set up their poem reflects that. It’s actually a quite brilliant way to convey their feelings without having to outright say it.
Maybe before you go judging other people’s work you should consider their motive behind it. And furthermore, it’s not constructive to only criticize their grammar without even mentioning the content. We are not here to tear people down; we’re here to build them up.
Thank you for standing up for me and understanding poetry like I do I love you and all your support you saw the meaning behind my words
Masarati, you don’t have to feel this way. You don’t have to feel unfixable. You are most certainly a person filled with purpose. Now, I know that the word “God” can seem so terrible to people who don’t truly have a relationship with him, but He does not think of you as a person not worth His time, care, and love. He thinks of you as one who can be His friend. He wants you to know that He loves you. It is true! I know because He has healed me. He has held my hand through times of trial, times of pain – physical and emotional – and He has loved me and will always love me with an unconditional kind of love that no one else but Him can give. He is love. His Son, Jesus Christ, died on the cross for you… for your sin and pain. He wants to let you into Heaven one day so that you can spend life with Him. He wants you to let Him heal you. Jesus died on the cross for your sins and rose again. He lives, and wants you to live… and not just live – but live well, with His beautiful, never-changing love. He won’t turn you away if you ask Him into your heart. Ask Jesus to come into your heart, It will change you. It isn’t magic, and maybe you won’t feel completely better all at once, but I can tell you from personal experience that Jesus is in it for life if you want Him to be; He is in it for the long haul. You are loved.
I appreciate you for speaking about God even tho we are to different religions I appreciate that you are a strong believer in God
Thank you, but I don’t have a religion. I’m not an atheist. I just don’t have a religion. I am so grateful to you for sharing your support for me, though. Much love!
Thank you for the kind words!