My favorite thing in life is rationalizing, coming up with strategies for problems, negotiating and compromising to , everyone get their own way and I also love doing fun things with friends such as talking and sharing special moments with each other. when it comes to rationalizing I decide that when I feel the need to get to the bottom of the reality of the situations. I also sit there and think deeply and follow the right pathway until I find the answer.
Journalistic Writing
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I like this.
I was thinking as I read it I would turn this into a little rhyme… so I’m guessing like a little poem. I don’t know what I call it, but when things are centered on one main subject and there’s an easy word like “rationalizing” to identify in the writing I always think it is cool to have every line flow together and there is no better way for me to do that than to rhyme. Like for example, “Everyday I find myself realizing, that my favorite thing is rationalizing…” something like that. Really bad but I think its cool.
I really adore the concept behind this work – to write about the little things that grant us with joy and solace. It seems not only like an engaging pass time, but also like a healthy and rejuvenating activity. In this world, there are plenty of things that are bound to put us on edge and make us frustrated; thus, it is a clever idea to just sit down for a moment and write down the activities or objects or people that keep us grounded.
I do have a few suggestions as to how to make this piece even better:
1) Proofread: There were several grammatical errors, in addition to awkward phrases, that I found while reading this work. I would recommend revising this so that the reader receives its full impact. For instance, in Sentence #1, you wrote, “…and compromising to , everyone get…” This particular section was confusing because, aside from the unnecessary comma, “compromise to” does not make sense in this context; I think that you intended to write “…compromise SO everyone…” It was little mistakes such as this that personally took me out of the moment. To prevent this from happening with other readers, it would be in your best interest to go back and check this piece for mistakes.
2) Expand: I wanted to know more about why these things are your favorite! You tell me what your favorite things are, but you do not elaborate enough to the extent that I could really connect with your point of view. Because of this, I advise that you try to explain and go into more detail about the benefits of “rationalizing, coming up with strategies for problems, negotiating and compromising” so that the reader can fully understand. Perhaps you can delineate a time where doing such actions resulted in an awarding experience. Really, just make it clear why these things are worthy of being labeled as your favorites!