You were wrong for me and you finally proved it
Proved every time and again by your stupid actions
Actions you’ll regret later on and I won’t care for your reaction
Reactions when i’m with my next wreckin life like a savage
Savage I will become best believe you know it’ll happen
It’ll happen because for too long it had me blinded
Blinded not having what I thought I looked for but never finding
Finding it harder to reach the finish line I’m running in circles
Circles I ran for so long for no reason never to cross the finish line
Lines in between were read and slowly in time
Time slowly showed what it took to cope
Coping I tried and I am losing all my hope
Hope you’ll one day see that I’m the greenest green
Ever seen but never ever noticing that is worse
Worse than what can be called lower than dirt
Dirt I became converted into mud over time
Time tried and true every time I did was for nothing
Nothing I tried never registered in your silly young mind
You’re going to mind when someone better compliments my swag
With swag way better than yours
And he would never call me his dime its not enough
To him I’m much more…He calls me His Million
Poetry
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I absolutely love the style of this poem: starting the next line with the word you ended the previous line. It’s a simple concept I’m surprise I haven’t seen it before, but it’s also so effective. It emphasizes the emotions the narrator is feeling, and each word becomes stronger with its repetition. Awesome.
thank you girl!yea i hope im the first to write something like that,,i thought i to myself i need to write something clever