This minimalist style is perfect. It keeps your piece simplistic and clean and adds a raw element to the feeling of despair in a “this is what it is” manner.
In the line “I am the worse,” I think you meant “worst” (the superlative form). Other than that, this is excellent. Keep writing!
This minimalist style is perfect. It keeps your piece simplistic and clean and adds a raw element to the feeling of despair in a “this is what it is” manner.
In the line “I am the worse,” I think you meant “worst” (the superlative form). Other than that, this is excellent. Keep writing!