GOD IM SO YOUNG HOW COULD THIS HAVE HAPPENED TO ME IM ONLY 7, WHY DO IT HURT SO BAD GOD I DONT UNDERSTAND THIS, IM TO YOUNG TO KNOW WHATS GOING ON, IM BROKEN AT 7 MY DADDY SAID HE LOVE MY BUT HE HURT ME AT NIGHT, MY MOMMY SAID SHE LOVE ME BUT I CANT UNDERSTAND WHY SHE SAID IM NOBODY, BUT A KNOCK AT THE DOOR FROM MY BEST FRIEND SHE SAID COME TO CHURCH WITH ME. ME GO TO CHURCH, GOD SURLY CANT HELP A BROKEN CHILD WITH NO CLUE, BUT I WENT ANYWAYS , I HAD MY FIRST ENCOUNTER WITH GOD, ALL OF A SUDDEN IT DONT HURT SO BAD THE NAMES THE LATE NIGHTS DADDY LOVE THE DIDNT HURT, WHAT COULD HAVE HAPPENED. I FEEL SOMETHING NEW, LOVE
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This is a very emotional piece that alludes to many underlying themes. It’s soothing sometimes to express deep personal thoughts, but if there is any sign of distress for a person it’s important one attends to that.
I can understand by the all cap letters the emotion but they’re not needed because the words speak for themselves. Your message is clear but also cryptic in a way with a long of strong sentences. Keep writing and expanding your voice! Good work
thank you so much