"Dear Maxi"
Dear Maxwell,
Thank you for everything that brought you right in front of me. I realize that we both endured a lot to reach this moment and I m grateful for your bravery and courage. I have a feeling that you have been waiting for me, just as much as I have been looking forward to you. Thank you for keeping me hopeful. Thank you for motivating my strength. Thank you for reminding me what I really want. Thank you for inspiring me, for helping me give myself true justice. Thank you because I see you accept me without fault, as if you can’t help it. It’s exhilarating knowing, that the more I expose myself, the more you fall for me. Thank you for your patience and humbleness, it never fails to remind me to slow down and take in the layers of the moment. Thank you for the dedication you made to yourself to be nobody else but you. More importantly, thank you for helping me believe! Thank you for being exactly who you are. Thank you because I see that with you, I keep evolving. We create this non-stop harmonious flow of integrity, respect, and passion. On my bad days, you seem to good to be true, but then I feel you in a way, that’s hard to explain. Like your watching me some how or recognize me in that moment. I’m immediately reassured even if my ego doesn’t want to be. I don’t really need to convince myself anymore these days. The feeling, it’s to strong and now I can taste it. It’s refreshing and consistent. I no longer fear it’s goodness, I understand it stems from me. From us and what we will create or have created already. I believe I ll always be able to feel you and you ll always be able to see me. I ll never have to convince you of who I really am, even if some days, I spend convincing myself. We go through everything together even if we really don’t want to. We don’t even show pain mercy. We don’t attempt to make each other feel better because we understand, pain demands to be felt. We stopped running and hiding the moment we accepted our fate. We go through it all together, wrapping ourselves around each other like stubborn vines. We hold steady, silently waiting for the passionate self expression that is the collateral beauty. That silver lining that we know is there because we created the lines. Thank you….I love you!
Your truly,
Sharon Dunn
Journalistic Writing
Woah…
This is the kind of writing which makes me wish I was in love. There were so many good lines and I’ll just highlight a few.
“It’s exhilarating knowing, that the more I expose myself, the more you fall for me.”
“Thank you because I see that with you, I keep evolving.”
“We don’t attempt to make each other feel better because we understand, pain demands to be felt.”
“That silver lining that we know is there because we created the lines. Thank you….I love you!”
In other words very nice. There are a few errors, only a few. All you have to do is read two or more times and you’ll catch them. This error is because I think the document copied the jounal writing wrong. There a lot of “you re” when it should be “you’re.”
Thank you so much