Oh! Let me guess
You didn’t like it cause you didn’t write it
And you couldn’t write it, cause we’re totally different
But once you’ve read how I seem to have put it.. Oh u liked it.. But didn’t like it
We want support, but have no idea on how to deliver it
We want encouragement.. but not to be the center of it
We want the warm cozy hug.. But not the sweat from it
A kiss on the cheek, but not the wetness of it
Lift me up like a kid after a fall
Like hands stretching out during a yawn
Like a basket tied down to the bike.. Let’s move along
Hit The Like Button.. Bring Me Along
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I like that your piece is direct and seems to have had a lot of inspiration. It’s common to have a particular instance/person in mind when writing which can sometimes be limiting but you balance out the poem nicely by relaying general feelings others might also have:
We want support, but have no idea on how to deliver it
We want encouragement.. but not to be the center of it (Excellent!)
We want the warm cozy hug.. But not the sweat from it
This is a great analogy:
A kiss on the cheek, but not the wetness of it
Thanks for contributing, keep it up!
Thank you for your feed back, I’m glad you enjoyed it.