This was incredibly profound and I would love to see it expanded upon. You could add some imagery so you are using “show not tell” which is important in the world of poetry. Also it is “lose” and not “loose” but otherwise your spelling is great! This theme is very intriguing so definitely try and write other pieces centered around it if you have more to write. Good job!
This was incredibly profound and I would love to see it expanded upon. You could add some imagery so you are using “show not tell” which is important in the world of poetry. Also it is “lose” and not “loose” but otherwise your spelling is great! This theme is very intriguing so definitely try and write other pieces centered around it if you have more to write. Good job!