The poem is endearing and also shows a bit of a vulnerable side. It’s asking will you love me just as I am, and that’s an important factor when falling in love. I like the simplicity of it and the balance of ‘what’ and ‘would’, which works in this case. Good work!
The poem is endearing and also shows a bit of a vulnerable side. It’s asking will you love me just as I am, and that’s an important factor when falling in love. I like the simplicity of it and the balance of ‘what’ and ‘would’, which works in this case. Good work!