capitalize that letter.
capitalize that gain.
capitalIMGOINGINSANE.
should i sit back and be party to such crimes?
watch from the kitchen as everyone dines.
not one man is divine.
it high time we get some spine.
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I love the use of capitalizing and not using spaces between IMGOINGINSANE. Trying to it that was as compared to “I’m going insane” does an effective job of visibly proving your point. This is a great example of form following structure.
My only advice would be to try and rework the last line. I get that it’s supposed to be like, “grow a backbone,” but the word spine comes off a little forced. I’m not sure that last line even has to rhyme, because the previous 3 do.