The end of 2018 is very near.
In just a matter of hours, 2019 will become the new year.
2018 was a sad year because my aunt died.
After 43 years of marriage, my uncle lost his bride.
But 2018 didn’t completely suck, I’ve seen worse years.
In just a matter of hours, 2019 will be here.
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I like your rhyme scheme here. However, the rhythm seems a little off. I’m not sure if you meant to do this or not. Keeping a couple lines off rhythm can make them stand out, but it seems like the off rhythm lines aren’t the important ones. (See the second and second to last lines compared to the third to last line and the one above it.) Could you expand on your choice to highlight the off rhythm lines?