There’s always the chance of loosing someone that you care about the most
It doesn’t always have to be dyeing
It could be they decide they don’t want to be around you anymore
then they make everything around you a living hell
but there’s that possibility you will find someone who makes your life flash before your eyes
your night and shining armour
your hero
your everything
but theres the possibility you will loose them…
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This poem touches on a real fear that most people have: the fear of rejection from someone you love. This is a great start!
I think that you can go deeper into the word choice of your poem. Here are some questions that might help you think through the creative process: What does it mean when someone makes your “life flash before your eyes,” and how does that relate to the possibility of losing that person? Why is there always the possibility that you will lose that person? What does life look like when the person you love doesn’t want to be around you anymore? What does “a living hell” look like to you?
Be intentional with every word you use and try to avoid cliches. This piece is your brain child. Keep playing with it and nurturing it. 🙂
thank you