To my future Wife
Thank you
Thank you for having a smile that rivals the stars
Thank you for having a laugh that is reminiscent of the babbling brooks
Thank you for having the ability to for all of the oxygen from my lungs with a mere glance over your shoulder
Thank you for being the weirdest person I know
Thank you for having the patience that is of a mother for her child
Thank you for having a heartbeat that syncs perfectly with my own
Thank you for being the only one who can calm the most violent storms in both my heart and mind with one, simple, embrace
Thank you for entwining your soul with mine
Thank you for the strength that of one, who has been to the brink, but yet has refused to break
Most of all
Thank you for allowing me to be the same for you
Poetry
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Beautiful! Simply beautiful! I love the part where you say that her smile rivals the stars.
It is so well-written. When you talk about the oxygen it is a great illustration, but I think there’s a word missing in there somewhere.
Altogether, amazing! Nearly had me in tears…
I just looked at it again and you are indeed correct. “For” was meant to be force but I forgot a couple letters lol. Thank you for the compliments and criticism
There is a magical feel to this piece; the kind you are certain exists and hope you attain. You’ve left readers with a sense of awe and wonder, and I have but one thing to say to my future husband: “Take notes.”
Looking forward to what you come up with next.
Beautiful! I love this so much!
I wish all people were like that. I loved it!